Confessions of a Murder Suspect

This is another badly written book. The way everything is phrased annoys me so much. And I get that the author tried to break down the fourth wall, but it didn't work. It's like a badly kept, over exaggerated diary. I mean, the plot is great. The book is full of suspense... untill about halfway through, when everything just slows down, and more and more completely unnecessary problems build up and we figure out the mystery before the protagonist. Okay, we GET that you're sad but not sad. We GET that your family is crazy. MOVE ON! SOLVE THE MYSTERY! 

-Ella-